Guest Post by Muslim Rizvi
About the Author: Muslim Rizvi is working as a Solutions Manager for an IT service company. He is based just outside of Toronto, Canada . Muslim is a writer, a poet, a painter, a playwright, an actor and a director and has been associated with theatre for over a decade.
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It’s absolutely beautiful. It takes you back as if you are right there. I really the use of English language to emphasize the point.
Have you thought about making a play based on this?
Very beautiful, very touching, very addictive.
I hate that particular after-effect which I always get, having read such “blast from the past” stuff. Yet, I love it!
It is simply great, Beautyful… very very thought full
i hope in future v will read more even better than this ………….
INSHA ALLAH…………….
writting expression is very mature ,and realistic , one can feel what actualy auther wants to share. beautiful way of expression. rare to get such good stuf to read , which touchs the core of your heart.
Absolutely awesome. The writer deserves a standing ovation. I wanted to read simply a few lines and move on, but I got glued to it and ended up reading the whole thing. twice. It reads like a true narrative and I wonder how many people will be able to relate to this. It brought back memories when I used to live in Karachi before moving to USA, back then Karachi was a peaceful city and life used to be innocent, and then came all the political leaders on the scene, the rest is history. Congratulations to the writer once again!!!
Hi Muslim. its beautiful. potrays the sensivity in you, that nothing could blemish or subjugate over the years, atleast since i know you. may this maddness live and thrive forever.this particular article reminds me of Zohra Nigah’s ” woh shaam ka pehla tara”.it also reminds me of our IBA days when we were looking for someone to do the female lead role for your ‘Ghalib poetic drama’.
so proud of you,
your friend,
Qanetah
I’m very curious with the writing. Can anyone please translate in into English, for non-pakistani reader like me? Thank you very much =D
I went through from A-Z ,its a little long but very good .Selection of words is beautiful and the flow is smooth with an excellent rhythm, which is very attractitve.
Most Beautiful thought :Arrival of 21st century and our backwardness.
Wish u all the best for ur future
Mehdi