Adnan Ahmad
I finished reading Mohsin Hamids second novel The Reluctant Fundamentalist over the weekend.
His first novel Moth Smoke captured my imagination quite vividly with several fascinating monologues in the novel and a theme that had everything to do with my generation and that age of mine. The author in between these two novels has aged and matured just like his readers including myself.
The new novel involves only one monologue with a man named Changez telling his story to an American, sitting at a restaurant in old Anarkali in Lahore. He keeps both his listener and his reader intensely engaged for about 184 pages, which is the entire length of the novel.
The novels main theme revolves around an increasing distrust between the East and the West and a troubled love story that at times makes one almost feel sick deep within but its intensity never fades throughout the course of the monologue. In the end it is a story about a twenty two year old who acts his age in turbulent times and in a love triangle where his rival has long passed away leaving behind a psychologically damaged soul who may never love again.
Changez’ decisions in the post 9/11 insecure times, especially for the Pakistani community, were both irrational and impulsive. India-Pakistan tensions of 2002 with his family without him in Lahore, perceived, and often real, discrimination against Pakistani Americans during that time, and his mutilated romance with a fellow Princetonian, all play a part in his decision to quit and go back and take up a job of a lecturer at a university in Lahore.
Just like Dara, “the apostate” of Moth Smoke, Changez, the reluctant fundamentalist, too goes down the spiral, given the consequences and magnitude of his decisions, but somehow he stays composed throughout the course of this story, unlike Dara. However, Changez is a lot less compelling character than Dara Shikoh and that goes well with the complex and uncertain undertones of the novel, which is really not about fundamentalism.
Mohsin Hamid completely evades the daunting issues Changez might have had faced in Lahore upon his return and always gets lofty when talking about his native city. He does so may be because he wanted the story to be only about New York or may be to contain the length in this unique style of writing in a single monologue or simply because he wants these questions to linger on readers’ mind as he ends the novels on an unsure note. Like the question about the girl who never was his and may never be but still exists in his memory or the questions about the identity of the gentleman he had been talking to throughout the story.
About Adnan Ahmad: Adnan is a free lance writer and works in financial sector. He lives in Harrisburg, Pennsylvania.
Photos taken from Mohsin Hamid’s website here.
A good review even though most readers are disapproving of the book. Lahore continues to capture our imaginations. Thanks Adnan Ahmad.
I read this couple of weeks back, I loved the one monologue style of writing but at the end I was still waiting for some answers. Moshin Hamid needs to write a part 2 to fill the gaps.
Mohsin Hamids latest work “The Reluctanat Fundamentalist” leaves much to be desired.I am not a literary critic but as an avid fan of Mohsin due to The Moth Smoke, i was highly disapointed.
He has tapped a great story line but has not delivered. This was a vast subject and the novel reads more like a precis then what he could have spun it into. The reader is left wanting more out of it. The monolog gets irritating when there are threads left un explored and to the readers imagination. Changez comes out more of a majnoo then a well educated well placed yuppie of New York and his return seems more impulsive then an action out of conviction.
But then perhaps all those stuck at that point in time undergoing those circumstances may have been forced by the tide that took them where they find themselves today. This could have explained/written down better by the author.
Moshin Hamid is a great writer and captures the essence of Lahore almost as well as Bapsi Sidhwa, this novellete though yearns to be taken out of the tight seams that Moshin has stitched it into.
if I am not wrong, Indian director mira nair(if I remember correctly) is going to make a movie on this novel. Not sure though.
i read the book a week back and a great read un putdownable but as you say :
“the novel, which is really not about fundamentalism.
Mohsin Hamid completely evades the daunting issues Changez might have had faced in Lahore ”
there is much left to be desired from the novel. what was incomplete to me is how Changez ‘jumps’ from being a drinking-fornicating-haram gosht eating, completely americanised newyorker – to a bearded islamic fundamentalist (apparently mlitant, judging from the last turn in the story). there is a huge gap where the real issues could have been tackled.
mohsin tells a story of disillusionment with the west, but does not address how and why Changez went to the other extreme. he makes no link and gives no reasoning for it.
plus the depression of the main charectar seems to have more to do with his girlfriend’s agony than anything else.
as much as ‘moth smoke’ delivered, this book dissappointed….fair to say that the style of narrative was gripping, but then again what really matters is the substance. :/