Posted on August 22, 2008
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14 responses to “Fiction@ATP: Bakka Gujjer

  1. PMA says:

    Uzma: Hope you continue visiting ATP. There are quite a few ‘gems’ hidden in ATP archives from many other contributors. Thanks for the kind words.

  2. Uzma says:

    PMA.
    I read your Rishta as well. It is another really nice short story. I am glad to find fiction & literature here at ATP. Also, from the detailed comments on that story, really glad to find that I am not the only engineer interested in writing, literature and arts.

  3. PMA says:

    Jalal HB & Hamza: Sorry if you felt that the story was somewhat incomplete. After the death of the main character it did not make much sense to continue. May be his ‘death process’ could have been prolonged. But then again that too might had been upsetting for some readers. Does the lil boy grow up to be a doctor? I don’t know. May be there is seed for the next story! If you are new to ATP, please visit the archive section for my other stories. Thanks for the encouragement.

  4. PMA says:

    Shazia R. Hussain & Aamir Ali: Thanks for the compliments and liking the story. When first writing it I really had no idea how to end it. What will become of Bakka. Finally the ending came out by itself. But after I finished writing it I must admit that I too got misty eyed. I felt so sad for him but left it that way. Sometime when you revise the first story line you loose the spontaneity and punch.